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Post by Sekhem on Feb 25, 2008 23:08:36 GMT -5
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Post by echo on Feb 26, 2008 20:39:17 GMT -5
It really was the most comforating morning of my life, and I'm so glad it came across through my writing! Thank you for reading Lotus!
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Post by starchasr on Feb 27, 2008 20:17:16 GMT -5
A sin to wake in your armz Your kiss is my only blight Oh how u leave me amazed, your touch is what I crave I can't breath this morning, I havent waken from last night,.... This is what came to mind after reading this piece, i think i have found my poetry's counter part on the oasis.....
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Post by echo on Feb 27, 2008 20:21:08 GMT -5
YOu are my partner in pen. Yin to my Yang. ... and it's funny because I really feel like you GET what I'm sayin. Diggin that.. "I can't breath this morning, I havent waken from last night,...." Dayum!
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Post by starchasr on Feb 27, 2008 20:31:34 GMT -5
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Post by echo on Feb 28, 2008 19:58:26 GMT -5
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Post by R.E.T.S. on Feb 28, 2008 20:19:07 GMT -5
Hmmm... A sin? Or Heavenly delight? Beautiful, Echo. Well written.
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Post by poetryhead on Feb 28, 2008 23:42:46 GMT -5
poetically pleasing my dear
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Post by echo on Mar 6, 2008 20:00:01 GMT -5
Haahah you're right RETS.. mos def a heavenly delight! hahah THanks MIchele!! Blessings to you both friends!
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Post by echo on Mar 12, 2008 19:25:06 GMT -5
modified for more truth...
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Post by Tammy Jones on Mar 17, 2008 14:46:36 GMT -5
quite very nice
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Post by echo on Mar 19, 2008 19:48:19 GMT -5
quite very nice Peace and blessings!!
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Post by tbone on Jun 14, 2011 13:47:32 GMT -5
I had to read it just the title made me wanna know what u meant....lOve like that makes you almost feel guilty from where it takes you...places you're not sure u were suppose to know...moments beyond imagination...well done...made me think back when I had moments like that
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Post by echo on Jul 6, 2011 12:36:30 GMT -5
I had to read it just the title made me wanna know what u meant....lOve like that makes you almost feel guilty from where it takes you...places you're not sure u were suppose to know...moments beyond imagination...well done...made me think back when I had moments like that this to me feels like forever ago. so funny the phases we go through in life.. I like how you put it as "moments beyond imagination." so true.
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Post by tbone on Jul 7, 2011 4:26:26 GMT -5
ya I was looking back at some of my posts from almost 4 yrs ago and can hardly believe that I wrote some of that stuff...sometimes its good to wade thru old words and remember where we came from and be grateful for where we are today
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