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Post by DreamCatcher on Nov 17, 2007 23:35:38 GMT -5
Inflations of my sensations formulate bliss, I orate to gestate kids and locate salvation's vibrations. Translation, amputation from induced cerebral medication via calibrated brain modulations our generation is faced with. Mutation, mutilation and true negations of elation dance in gyrations when they spin sedative webs of stagnation around our vocations. No patience left in the nations breath, cancellations of celebrations swept across the populations crops....no thanks given, the planet rots. We eat the fruit of our labors, and all we seek is to poison our neighbors.....there is a time for saviors.....and when it comes, will you save yours? Vaporous sky scrapers taper towards the sky, ghosts stranded on the planet and we dont know why. Time....illusion or hallucination of a way to work towards a lucid nation? Summation of fears and dreams appears and gleams.....wars are fought but we dont hear the screams. Death in the name of comfort, murder for freedom. When will we recognize that all we can do is be ONE? These guns richochet off the mirror and bounce back a little clearer, tearing wholes in our souls and bringing the fear more. Dear lord.....what have we done?
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Post by Tammy Jones on Nov 18, 2007 0:25:55 GMT -5
I am feelin this dream.
respect,
Tammy
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Post by bythewurd on Nov 26, 2007 16:31:07 GMT -5
If only we all saw the err of direction in disection.
Nice drop Dream catcher ....incredible flow!
Blesssssssss
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Post by blackchild on Apr 10, 2008 13:53:01 GMT -5
....no thanks given, the planet rots. We eat the fruit of our labors, and all we seek is to poison our neighbors.....there is a time for saviors.....and when it comes, will you save yours?
...Definately feelin the truth in this piece..
Death in the name of comfort, murder for freedom. When will we recognize that all we can do is be ONE? These guns richochet off the mirror and bounce back a little clearer, tearing wholes in our souls and bringing the fear more. Dear lord.....what have we done?
I ask myself this question all the time....saddening...
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Post by Park Heights on Apr 12, 2008 17:49:55 GMT -5
WOOOOOOOOOOOW.... that was well thought out and put together just as well... I'm feeling the message too... great piece poet.
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Post by Sekhem on Apr 23, 2008 9:40:26 GMT -5
Wow...preciate your style and the message of this ... just your asking the question... gives me hope. Well dropped bro! LL
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Post by Babygirl on Apr 30, 2008 23:21:50 GMT -5
poignant message in this piece DC. questions asked in this scribe will probably stand test of time if we continue on this same path we are on in this country...and that is a sad state of affairs.
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Post by WlkWlk3 on May 6, 2008 9:29:35 GMT -5
man... what have we done?... this was some truth you got here...
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Post by Poeticrebellion on May 8, 2008 17:37:30 GMT -5
Or what haven't we yet done...
prvoking scribe
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