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Apr 26, 2011 11:50:19 GMT -5
Post by tbone on Apr 26, 2011 11:50:19 GMT -5
I can't recall the day we met But your lOve I can not forget You're like lightning thru my veins In your kiss I forget my name
You are my Fire You are the Flame As I find Pieces of you I find...pieces of me too
I feel your breath on my skin That's when my world begins You and me against them all In your arms I feel so small
You are my Lover You are my Friend In you I found pieces of me Hope you find pieces that you need
This life long puzzle has taken me to my knees Now that you're here I've never felt so free
The day we met I might not know One thing is I'm not letting go I'll take you for better or worse Because this lOve is more than words
With a ring on your hand I'll be forever your man In you I've found pieces that I need So won't you take these pieces of me
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Apr 27, 2011 14:43:27 GMT -5
Post by echo on Apr 27, 2011 14:43:27 GMT -5
AW!!!! I love this. "As I find Pieces of you I find...pieces of me too" Love the wording and description you found here. This is how I feel about my husband. So weird how someone can show you yourself as you find them. Great piece
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Jul 30, 2011 5:48:33 GMT -5
Post by R.E.T.S. on Jul 30, 2011 5:48:33 GMT -5
You are my Fire You are the Flame As I find Pieces of you I find...pieces of me too I've never resorted to plagiarism, but this section here just tempted me something fierce! Nice work.
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