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Post by tbone on Aug 24, 2011 17:27:28 GMT -5
I don't belong here Face down in the street The taste of my own heart in my teeth I was the one who would pull the stars down for you Wrap them in pieces of me Now you are gone I am left alone A heart full of dreams of US Blindly you slipped away Into the night A night that I try and find comfort in You were the first You were my ONLY The sun it holds no warmth for me The summer turns as cold as the deepest winter
I don't belong here Helpless as a lost child Where is my hand to hold onto Where is my morning smile Stolen away with your shadow Ripped from me like fading youth I gave my all, not nearly enough You took more than I thought I had Epic though I may become The pain will only serve to lift me up No one is stainless No one is untouchable I must only crawl til I can walk again Heal these wings to fly and then Realize...I don't belong here
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Post by R.E.T.S. on Aug 24, 2011 18:38:22 GMT -5
Amazing! Well done.
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Post by echo on Aug 25, 2011 16:00:48 GMT -5
DAMN! You just keep getting better and better. This was so painful!! I like the hope at the end.. This part was intense: "Face down in the street The taste of my own heart in my teeth" I can't get the image out of my head!!! Great job!
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Post by tbone on Aug 31, 2011 19:30:40 GMT -5
thanks guys...my son had his heart broken for the first time and it broke my heart as well and reminded me of how devistated I was the 1st time....glad you liked it
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Post by echo on Sept 1, 2011 11:23:33 GMT -5
thanks guys...my son had his heart broken for the first time and it broke my heart as well and reminded me of how devistated I was the 1st time....glad you liked it
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